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Tiny Toes Will Follow Me…
As you were growing big,
I grew smaller like you…
Laughed at your innocent talks,
Those capturing smiles on your lips…
Held you close to my chest,
A warm place for you to rest…
The depth of my passion,
Grew greater and greater every day…
Chased you everywhere,
Tried to follow your tiny toes…
I already can see you growing,
To follow my feet one day…
My closest friend you will be,
In me always your trust would be…
© 2013 Pimmi Nag
I love the sentiment and wonderful futur hopes and dreams. jk
I appreciate, Best wishes. God bless…
Really heart-touching poetry lines. And I will love to read all you poetry blogs mam.
That was a beautiful compliment this morning from you. I was honored. I feel the best poetry is when it touches someone’s soul. It creates those waves between the words and the readers… Best wishes…
Thanks for your wishes mam. And yes you are right mam best poetry is when it touches someone’s soul. And also mam, you are writing all these by going in thorough depth. You are going inside & expressing what you are feeling & that comes out to be as heat touching poetry lines.
I am a psychologist and can feel a three year old, a senior resident in an old home, a wife, a mother, a girlfriend, a son, a father,and as a grandparent although I am not that old.
One should be very compassionate towards other’s feeling.I hope my writing can touch your soul to feel others soul.. Best Wishes…
You are right mam. Feel for others. The one who is writing all these beautiful poetry can judge any character because he/she has already undergone in that character & knows what others are feeling.
Sandeep, I am glad you are enjoying reading my writings…best wishes…