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A Pit Of Darkness…
Loneliness sets a very deserted scene,
It messes up your daily routine.
Loneliness is all you see everywhere,
No music and no color anywhere.
The sea goes silent and the sky loses its color,
The days seem to be dark and nights even darker.
You lose all hopes and feel deserted,
Like a flower alone seeks the sun to exist.
You fall in a pit of complete darkness,
Taking you far away from all happiness…
© 2012 Pimmi Nag

You have drawn the real picture of loneliness but if we friends of nature you can listen music of trees,flowing water of fountains and rivers Have a great day Pammi Nag
Thanks, nature is very beautiful and very sincere to us. But we have to have a vision to see it closely. You are right. Nature is bountiful by the grace of God. Best Wishes…
Thanks for going through my writings. Your comments are very inspiring for me. Best Wishes…Happy Friendship Day